梦中你拍我的窗？ 
                    急切地问我 
                    到底谁更无情？ 
 
                    满天的星辉不语 
                    我遂忆起94年冬天的那场雪 
                    下了足足三天三夜 
                    还不够白！ 
                    没能遮住那女子 
                    放在阶前的那颗心！ 
                    血红了一地！ 
 
                    到底谁更无情？ 
                    共用多少春花秋月？ 
                    饮长江水！ 
                    为何不解恨？ 
                    尚来梦中质询！ 
 
                    你不是人生得意么？ 
                    为何夜半来拍我的窗 
                    问我到底谁更无情？ 
 
                    我遂卷起长长的衣袖 
                    在十几年后的今天 
                    复你 
 
                    把我的故乡全留给了你 
                    把我最喜欢的那片山水全留给了你 
                    把我和我的泪水全放逐天际 
                    这还不够么？ 
 
                    那株松树也比我幸福！ 
                    连蒲公英也是！ 
 
                    别再随便地入我梦境！ 
                    别再问我那个问题！ 
                    千江有水千江月！ 
                    过各自的生活！ 
 
 
 (前晚梦中故人质询,挥之不去,无奈,遂作一复.)
                          
                                               梦之江南08年3月30日下午